Here is a movie we made using iMovie on an iPad! It is about persuasive writing. Enjoy and leave us a comment!
Persuasive Writing from Gabrielle Lavars on Vimeo.
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on “Persuasive Writing”
9 Comments on “Persuasive Writing”
Here is a movie we made using iMovie on an iPad! It is about persuasive writing. Enjoy and leave us a comment!
Persuasive Writing from Gabrielle Lavars on Vimeo.
Well done everyone! I really like to see our native animals free in their natural habitat when I’m hiking or camping in the bush. Once a possum ate some food scraps left right outside my tent and I was able to peak out and see it. And it makes me really sad when I hear of animals being mistreated.
PS: It was a little hard to hear some of your voices over the background music. You might need to use bigger voices next time.
Hi Darren!
Thanks for the compliment we appreciate that and we will work on our voices to make them a bit louder. Did you enjoy it? Hope you did! Thanks for watching it!
~Noah
Dear grade 5,
Great job Daneil and lucy! I hope you and lucy can do another one soon!
from Erin
good job lucy and Daniel!
Dear Everyone,
This is the Napoleons news about the persuasive text from every single draft about keeping animals in cages.
Dear grade5,
I love the introductions good job
great job guys from Napoleon
Dear Grade 5
Magnificent persuasive texts!
From Kristyl
Dear Mrs Page,
Are you loving it. It’s about the persuasive text why it’s cruel to keep animals in cages,
From Daniel.